Life Changing Mindset

"Aussie Poetry". I have positive early Aust. but am looking for the negative poems where people didn't settle, Early Australian and Modern poems where people didn't adjust to living here and did not show mateship. Looking for negative responses to parallel with the positive poems that I already have. I need the negative so that I can reinforce the ;positive. Hope someone can help me! I can't think where to look Thanks heaps June This is for year 8 and 9

Can someone please help me write a positive poem about Oprah? I need to write a poem for school about who I think the most beautiful person in the world is. I chose Oprah. If anyone could please help me... maybe start it off or possibly give me a few lines I could use..I'd really appreciate it. Any advice would be helpful! Thanks.

The positive thinking poem.? Little birdy in the sky, You look up and it shits in your eye. You don't mind and you don't cry, You just thank God that cows don't fly.

Poetry for Year 9 and 10. "Aussie values". I have positive but I am looking for negative early Australian Early Australian and Modern poems where people didn't adjust to living here and did not show mateship. Looking for negative responses to parallel with the positive poems that I already have. I need the negative so that I can reinforce the ;positive. Hope someone can help me! I can't think where to look Thanks heaps June

Can anyone recommend poems (or anything else) that have to do with having a positive body image for women? I'm working on a contemporary performance piece for a talent show, and I'd like to include some poetry. The theme of the piece is celebrating your body, with a focus on plus-sized women. Other than Lucille Clifton's "Homage to my Hips," can anyone think of any poems that have to do with having a positive body image, either as a plus-size woman or a woman in general?

What do you think of my poem, negative/positive critique i dont care? Words tangle like spiderwebs Lies exhaled from your blistered lips, yeah I can see through it but I stay anyways Your chest is empty not the echo of heart beat To lift the silence, it's heavy like a freight train So I'll keep singing and forget the truth I've known For ages just to stay with you, because I pity you, I do.

Any Positive Suggestions About My Poems? I am really young and have been noticed for my work with the arts. Yet, I know I can improve. I am 13 years old and am thinking about improving my writing skills soon. Here are two of my poems. The first is a new one and the second is my favorite. Thanks Ps I do not have a name for the first. Any suggestions are welcome! :) What is life If it ends with death? What is love If you feel broken? What is a beginning If it always ends? It is all worth it I can see now To live freely And wonder about With almost no goal Except to carry on This is a game We seem like simple pawns Yet as I seek To find meaning I come across Something more achieving We are truly one A whole, a piece Something unique In the least So now, I will answer your questions With knowledge and ease What is life If it goes on forever? What if love Without risk? And what if every end Didn't result with a beginning? Black and White There is no difference between black and white No distinction among a daisy and rose And rain and shine are not unlike When a bird sings and cat growls, there is no irregularity We are all one, not two And must stay that way On our journey into Life's endless abyss Together, we can make a difference Together, we can put a stop to all wrong Together, we can walk freely amongst our peers Together, we can change our world No one can be judged Without personal connection No one can be put off For anyone of more importance We will be one Fight as one Act as one And love as one

Who else is tired of? The same kinds of poems all the time? They all seem to be about despair and sadness and lost dreams and its all free verse and I don't know.I just haven't seen any positive poems in a long time. I'm kind of tired of seeing the same stuff all the time. It's just my opinion, but what do you think?

Is there anyway this could be both positive and negative in a poem? Examples? For my poem i need to wright a scene in a book that is both negative and positive in any way. In my scene, someone is shot and dies, the main charector is freaking out and is in shock of it, while her other friend is super touchey to the subject...i know this is kinda hard to think of anything positive :/

How can i right this wrong? So I like posting my poems on Facebook. I recently broke up with my bf of 10 months, and because it happened out of blue, I began to lose trust for guys, and keep my feelings to myself. So my poem was basically about how my feelings for one guy can be washed away when another guy appears. I tagged my crush, only because it had to be the best poem I wrote. However, I think he took it to be about him, and untagged himself. You may ask why is this a big thing? Well I always tag/post positive poems or videos and he never took those down. And plus the poem was kinda about him, but when I said I move on quickly, I was referring to my ex, and he was the guy I had moved on to. I want to make sure there are no hard feelings between us because I am so scared I ruined a good chance between us. Any suggestions? BTW, we are friends in college and he knows I like him, and he flirts a little too. We met like 3 weeks ago.

my first positive love poem? Time Capsule Your arms are my capsule Your lips are my time The faster we kiss the faster time flies If i could halt this time line I'd stop it here in this moment Locked in this capsule With time flying by short, i know but i like it. what do you think?

Do you think this "positive" thinking society is getting ridiculous? People seem to always expect everything to be happy all the time and everyone to always have a 50-inch bugs bunny smile across their faces. But this is just unrealistic...Sometimes you feel negative emotions. It's a part of life. It seems like because of this "positive" thinking idea, unhappy people aren't always pleasant to be around because they're the quiet ones in the back ground or writing poems to themselves. In our culture, you are meant to feel "positive" to such an extent that most people are on some kind of mood-altering drug or medication in order to "fit in". Do you think if we just embraced all of our emotions, life would be easier and not so depressing?

So what do you think of my poem...more positive than the last.? For you all that read my last poem here's the one that i'm going 2 turn in. I am from the world of technology where there are cell phones and paired bluetooth. A place where ipods and MP3s are in and Cd players are out. I am from a crazy kind of music, from hardcore to punk and a little techno to rave my pain away, with a little metal to bring it back I am from television where they teach you right from wrong weak from strong and warn you don't try this at home, though I attempt it anyway Im from a virtual world where I can create life and take it away by the click of my mouse and bring 'em back if I so choose. Can't think of a good closing to the poem but this is what I plan to turn into my Psychology teacher. Oh and the last part was based on the Sims.

Help Please!!!!!!!!!? So this is a new poem I've written. This is the first positive poem that I've written that I've actually liked. Can you please give me your opinions on it. :D Act of Love The soft words he whispers to me delicately tickle my ear My lips part and a small gasp escapes them I feel myself smile, my eyes crinkle with my happiness It is a secret between us This feeling we share It was all so new not too long ago This warm feeling in our chests The never ending happiness we have Our hands are intertwined in his lap It shows are bond Unshakable Unbreakable Our legs touch and I giggle We seem to have the same thought We both want to leave This place we sit while beautiful is not where we want to be At last we stand to leave, our hands lovingly clasped He whispers one last thing to me before we leave I stand on tiptoes to hear and he bends down to me He whispers: "I love you"

poem i wrote...positive criticism welcome? id just like to say its effin good to be back on Y!A i haven't been on in a long ass time but ive missed yall especially in this section lol. Anyway, I wrote a poem a few weeks ago while lets face it I was stoned and I was thinking about this woman I really like and it just flowed out. I thought it sounded amazing when I was stoned lol and even now sober I think its decent. Positive criticism always welcome, negative insulting bullshyt gets reported...but anyway lemme know what u think how can i resist you? such a beautiful creature, standing within my grasp, still beyond full reach. how can i resist you? smiling face dancing in heavens reflection, clouds underneath your feet, lips tender as sunshine. how can i resist you? pale moon light skin, ivory beauty with no discretion, thinking about her almost becomes sin. how can i resist you? saddened sapphire blue eyes, screaming to be loved to be held, yet trapped in an unforgettable demise. how can i resist you? my love of damnation, how could i have known, that id give into temptation.

What do you get an 19 month old for his christening? I have no idea what to get him. Toys, teddies and money are out of the question. I was thinking about writing a poem and framing it. I thought the poem could very positive and how I feel about him (he's adopted into my family but I feel like he is biologically part of my family. He's my only first cousin, when I first met him he didn't cry like he did with anyone else and it was like we bonded straight away)

How is love a positive feeling? People who do not fall in love are happier than the ones who love. I fell in love twice and got nothing but pain. I fell into depression and became suicidal- thanks to love. I think its the most negative feeling in the world I've read poems and quotes glorifying love.... how is love positive?

Helpful Ideas For Story for A2 English? Need help filling in some gaps!!? For my English coursework i have to genre translate a poem into a short story... Here is my poem... Two doves upon the self same branch two lilies upon a single stem Two butterflies upon one flower Oh happy they who look upon them Who look upon them hand in hand Flushed in the rosy summer light Who look upon them hand in hand And never give a thought to the night My idea is of a young couple (18/19) at the time of the first world war. I am basing it in a garden to try and replicate the imagery used, and i am making out it was their place and its where they spent most of their time together. My twist is that the boy is going off to fight the wafr and unfortunately dies. I want to end the story as she sits in the garden alone surronded by negative imagery to contrast with the poems positive imagery. I think she is going to be pregnant, however i will only hint at this in the end lines. If you can give me any ideas about things they could say to each other before he would leave, how to structure it, and any other ideas yu may have it would help a lot. My first piece was quite good and my teachers are pressuring me to produce the same quality again, but the ideas just arn't there!! Any inspiration to get me going would be greatly appreciated. Thank You!!

Any one know some really sweet poems to get a girl to give u another chance? She said she's scared to give me a chance cuz of how many I've gotten and she broke up with me cuz I was an a hole. She said she's thinking about but she doesnt know. Plz help positive answers only I can't lose this girl

Help please!!!!!!!!!? So this is a new poem I've written. This is the first positive poem that I've written that I've actually liked. Can you please give me your opinions on it. :D Act of Love The soft words he whispers to me delicately tickle my ear My lips part and a small gasp escapes them I feel myself smile, my eyes crinkle with my happiness It is a secret between us This feeling we share It was all so new not too long ago This warm feeling in our chests The never ending happiness we have Our hands are intertwined in his lap It shows are bond Unshakable Unbreakable Our legs touch and I giggle We seem to have the same thought We both want to leave This place we sit while beautiful is not where we want to be At last we stand to leave, our hands lovingly clasped He whispers one last thing to me before we leave I stand on tiptoes to hear and he bends down to me He whispers: "I love you"

I need a play on words, like "Hurts so good" Something negative and positive? I wrote a poem about a woman who is in "love" (lust, really) with a man that she knows she won't hear from after this night is over. She is thinking about going home with him. She knows it's a bad idea, but doesn't think she cares. I want to title it with a play on words, something positive AND negative. "Irresistibly dangerous" something like that. Two words, preferably.

What do you think of Michael Jackson? Be positive, this is for a memorial book I am writing for his family...? ONLY POSITIVE FEEDBACK PLEASE! Tell me what you think of Michael Jackson, send me poems, short stories, whatever, about him, his children, and his family. Try to use only encouraging words to get them through this. Please help in any way you can! God bless you for reading! xoxo Hannah

i need some poems or quotes? i need some good poems or quotes about life and staying positive because my mum is not well and im only 14 and my best friend who is like a sister to me keeps telling me to think positive i need some poems about being positive and life just to help me get through it would be a great help

Please rate my poems!!? Thank you..? I have recently started to try and write poems about life situation and the world. So here is two poems. I decided to write a poem about someone who passed away and a poem about someone commiting suicide. Please would you rate my poems, state the positive and negatives points about it. Thank you. The 1st one goes like this: I look into the sky And I say goodbye While I shed a tear Wishing you were here. No one knows the pain I feel I hope one day it will heal But for now I'm blessed to say I know your there when I pray. Since the day you passed away Life just seems so grey And I still remember your smile Although it has been a while. And when I'm all alone Although I cannot phone I still talk to you And thats what helps me through. I will never forget you Our memories will always be true And no more tears shed Now that you are dead. I know everything will be alright When I see a bright star at night And so I send my love To you in heaven above. The 2nd one goes like this: You sit and think life is not fair You sit and think noone will care You shout so loud so everyone can hear But noone does, now the message is clear As you stand upon the cliff Wondering whether it is worth the risk Your heart starts to pump As you get ready to jump Know u'll never know If suicide was the best way to go As you jump into the air And say your last prayer. Sreya- Why do you not like them?

What do you think, of these poems. ? My last post for a while.? These are for my Poetry Club...... To all of my dear contacts and friends, I will be leaving this week, i have to go home, we have another death in the family; Don't know, when I will be back. taking my PC along. Please hold back some of your question, 2 per contact will be good.. So here are my Poems. What you think, Constructive corrections are welcome. I will miss you all so dearly.... Rosa....... Poem, Who will dare to Harm. Loneliness is what I love perhaps what I hate. Happiness bi-dded goodbye and passed from the gate Tears roll off my cheek as I pray,hopefully joy hugs, me Before my hair turns grey. Cold vibes of my friends make me sad, Through that troubles me, Am I so bad? I cannot question the creator of Heaven and Earth, All I asked Am I not happiness worth? You said I have drawn you in my palm, I 'm your child "Who will dare to Harm'' ? Poem. The World. ~ This World, A world of no escape, A World of hate, and rape, Either drug abused, or a mental case~ You judge. You hold a grudge, You hate, you yell, you cast out, You scream and shout, Are you so different. Poem. Could this be love. ( Ladies what do you think. ) Our love is like a fairytale The story that it tells Makes us think its fake With fairies casting spells My knight in shining armour To come and rescue me To fight through all of this Just so I can be free Your my handsome prince Who makes my life complete We’ll live happily ever after As both our hearts will beat. Poem. Our Love. Your smile is like the sunshine warming my day. Your the first and last thing that makes me feel this way. Your hugs started as a pat on my back, but now I can feel that they’re more then that. Time will keep ticking, and we will grow old, but your hand in mine will never get cold. Our love is more then affection. Our love has the lords protection Last poem...... I need some positive advice for this poem, it belongs in my adult group poem . Please tell me should i sent it in or not i just need a yes or a no. Thanks. Ok here is the Poem my first try. Poem I'm a woman--- Not a Mystery. I' m all a woman, not a mystery You look into my eyes and see Things you don't understand. Am I a mystery? I think not. You look at my smile, You search for something that isn't there, Am I a mystery? I think not. \ You listen to my voice and call me an angel, This angel is flesh and blood, Not a doll to be put on show, You see--I'm not a mystery I'm me, I'm flesh and blood, Touch me, I won't break, There's no mystery here. caress me, feel the warmth, I'm not a mystery: I'm a Woman. Here I am- desires abound relentless and sensuous-Yours to caress, Like a flower, make me bloom, Don't stop, not even to rest! No mystery here, just a woman. I feel the weight of your body against mines Your heavy breath upon my skin. The most gentle touch on my thigh The soft nibbling on my breasts- Moving slowly in a down ward motion. Now you see, I'm no mystery, I'm your Woman . I'm all Woman. Thanks for your Comments, I will miss you all like crazy! Love Rosa. Hi, Every one it's getting hot up in this place , OMG i'm crying, please mail lots of boxes of tissues this way , you guys are my family away from family, I appreciate all of you. so many awesome answers you all are winners. I thank God for blessings me with so many caring people, I love you from the button of my soul. See you soon if the Lord permit. Now I know i will rest in peace tonight.

a positive aspect in the world today? i have no sense in poems. i want to write a poem, but the only thing i can come up with is medicine. and my mind goes blank when i think about it.

poems for a girl that might like you? i have this dumb class and u have to write a note to one of ur peers in the class, a positive note. i have this girl i like in there, so i was thinking if i can write a poem about her or something like that. But the thing is, i don't know here at all, would this be a pretty good way to get to know her. And i kinda think she likes me because she puts on quite a stare. thanks all!

I need a play on words, like "Deafening Silence" Something negative and positive, but for a romantic situation? I wrote a poem about a woman who is in "love" (lust, really) with a man that she knows she won't hear from after this night is over. She is thinking about going home with him. She knows it's a bad idea, but doesn't think she cares. I want to title it with a play on words, something positive AND negative. "Irresistibly dangerous" something like that. Two words, preferably.

Positive feedback on this poem please !? Dedicated to a friend of mine. She took her life by suicide. Blood loss. God bless her soul. --Just came back from rehab… Slit my dirty wrist, I take it as a bliss, The gushing pain, takes the tender love of a kiss, Sure, life is something you’d greatly adore, But it always ends dry, so what am I here for? --The idea is full-proof… A shock in my veins brought me to a dead end, I will always come back; I will try to cut again, On the carriage, rushing through the hospital door, She saw the knife, the blood, all on the school floor, She thought I was kidding, skidding, now she’s forbidding, Staring at her face, the tears, just reminiscing. Awestruck, her beautiful smile was missing A carefree person, doing so fine in your life, What distress, why’d you have to leave it behind? Trust me, I know the pain of a knife, I know it’s wrong, that just makes the feeling refined, Those seven words, I cried, lying on my hard bed, What you said, why couldn’t you shoot me in the head, Physically destroying, emotionally death’s regret, Take it here bitch, I’ll make you never forget. “Nurse, prepare the IV fluids and the Respirator!" You will cry, Must I defy? Will you deny? The fact that we’ll never get by, Tears in your eyes, Will it revive? The sighs of a lie, The bullet that flies, I need to rely, On what you need to apply… How ‘bout this; why don’t you fucking die? Greed takes mankind to a new direction, Making us want more, more life in redemption, Everything else knows in solid concrete, When life ends, but for us, it all depends, Like you, and the hundred of others standing in here, You will sacrifice anything, just to live for that extra year, What’s the point, you’re going to die eventually dear, Now the question returns, what am I doing here? God put me on the Earth, expecting I will purge my sins, But look at me, suicidal, in the flesh and on the skin, Trying to make my point just a little shorter, Like my life, taken from the knife, no supporters. I close my eyes, will I float in purgatory? Like Romeo did, it shall end the love story, I’m losing sense, quickly, god let me go now, I’m done, here’s my personal bow. I let this happen because a fight got a little cold, But don’t make the same mistake, as your life will soon unfold, You can get over it, I learnt that the hard way, As for me, I won’t live to see another day. *Exit*

I want to hear peoples opinion about this poem. Could be positive, could be negative.? But please don't be rude, i just want know how everyone interprets thing different. I know it's kinda long, but feedback would be apperciated, in a constructive way. Any rude answers will be disreguarded. Is it good/bad, does it make sense, can you relate it to any kind of situation in your life, if so, care to elaborate? I'm just trying to see all the ways of understanding it, and if what it means to me is entirely different then what it means to someone else, or if the message is clear. I Told You So You wanted it You got it There it is Finally the truth I trusted you Gave you my heart You turned around And ripped it apart This is why i didn't Want to let you know I should of seen it coming When i saw you with that Hoe She's just another Tramp And someday soon you'll see That i've been right here all along But now you can't have me You asked me how i felt You said you needed to know I didn't want to tell you Couldn't let my feelings show I wanted to trust you You told me i could But when i told you my feelings You did what i knew you would Now your with that girl Who i know won't stick around But you can't run to me this time I'm not going another round I gave you your chance I said take it or leave it Hoping for the best But not expecting Sh*t I'm not gonna stay here And try and mend your heart When i told you about her I told you not to let it start And when she up and leaves Because i know she will You'll be broken-hearted And i'll be mad enough to kill But i won't help you out of this I told you what she's like I knew you wouldn't listen And she'll walk out of your life And now three weeks down the road Your all on your own You don't understand Why she left you all alone But i told you how she was And what she couldn't be Now all your time wasted Could of been with me She up and left you hanging What they call "high and dry" Now you want me back But i want to know why I gave you several warnings I did everything i could But i can't deal with the decision You made, i knew you would You told me she was different That she had changed so much I told you you were wrong And, oh, guess what Where's your little Sl*t The one you wanted so bad When she up and left you I was all you had You blew off all your friends For your little toy So i guess your loneliness Is the life you enjoy How do you think i felt When you chose her over me Because you only saw What you wanted to see Now your standing on my porch With a huge frown on your face But what i don't understand Is why your at my place When i gave you your options You made your own choice So please help me understand Your sudden loss of poise You look so pathetic A little bit confused So please tell me "baby" How it feels to be used I told you i'd be pissed If she ever hurt you So now i will hunt that Sk*nk down So i can hurt her too But ask me why, Babe Why i'm fighting your fight When i wanted nothing to do with her Out of mind Out of sight I will find that B*tch And put her in her place Let her see whats to come Next time she gets up in my face I told you time and time again You didn't want to hear it Now your expecting me to take you back But you shouldn't be expecting sh*t Tell me again why you want me back Oh, i've already heard that one I told you once, told you twice I'm not just here for when you want some But she broke your heart And for that she'll pay No one hurts you for any reason And ever gets away So run to her Tell her to hide Things are getting ugly Now that she's on my bad side Run along and tell her With the confidence you lack Oh and while your out Please don't come back I don't want to see you Don;t want to hear your voice All the distant memories Drowned out in the noise The pain is still too strong The wounds are still too deep So i put on a happy face all day And cry myself to sleep Have you ever had someone Rip your soul in two Tear your heart to pieces And then walk all over you Have you felt a thousand knives Buried deep inside your chest Have you been told it will go away When it hasn't yet Have you ever felt the flames Has your body lit on fire Everytime someone touches you You burn with deep desire Has your heart been served to you On a silver tray And has the holder Turned and walked away Have you told someone your secrets All your imperfections Only to find out your trust Was in the wrong direction Does it hurt for you to breathe Is your rib cage closing in Everytime i cross your mind On the slightest whim Can you know when i'm in the room Before you even turn around Can you sense how i'm feeling Before i even make a sound Do you know when i am close Do you feel safest in my presence Am i the reason for your being Am i the core of your essence Can you tell me my favorite color Can you tell me who i want to be Can you look me in the face And say you never

really inspiring poems? Heyy, im feeling really bored and empty. I feel like i need a positive inspiration. It could be a ... poem movie book essays sayings metaphors and any10 else u can think of!!

Do you like my poem or would you say its not some of my best work compared to my other poems? In order to read it and hear it the way I do, just keep reading it like its just one big sentence, don't stop at the end of the line just keep reading continuously. Rate 1 (being bad) too 10 (being great), comments welcomed, remember I wrote this kind of quickly, because I was bored, and I want to publish poerty and I don't think 10 poems can make up a book. What is life? Life is Good and evil Right and wrong Dark and light Black and white Heaven and hell Love and hate Emotion and devotion Deception and affection Negative and positive All which go Hand in hand One without the other would be incomplete Life is Full of opposites That attract And make a whole Life is A book…a treasure Yet to be discovered And the world is the golden library Each person has their own Books with bad grammar and mistakes With chapters yet to be written And errors yet to be fixed Each with A deeper meaning Whom so many search for But is rarely found The book Of life Is reading In between the lines Its imperfection That makes up perfection It’s what you cannot see or feel That makes life worth while Changing like the seasons Living for today Because tomorrow is unknown And has yet to come The Book Of life Has secrets With hidden truth Only it knows And has knowledge of What Tomorrow Will bring As for Today is in your HANDS And only yours alone Tomorrow being left for you to determine

poem similar to "hope is the thing with feathers?"? i really enjoyed the poem "hope is the thing with feathers" by emily dickinson and also "if i can stop one heart from breaking." these poems are very deep and definitely make you think. however, they are also positive :) what are some other poems similar to these? i also enjoy reading frost and longfellow. thanks so much!

What do you think of my poems? Heyy guys I always write poems and this is my page http://www.poemofquotes.com/members/profile/0oAngelo0 Please check it out, I have 87 poems on there, the rest are in my 1b5 writing books at home. um yeah so can people check out a few of my poems and then answer what they think on here and what you like about them etc. Love and light beautiful positive ?

In your opinion, how are my poems? 10 points after 6th answer!!? Top 5 Favorite Poems that I’ve made: Title: Expiration Date I'm tired of people saying that everythings gonna be okay when its not gonna be okay I just want all of the people to get out of my face Life is a waste no matter what you say I constantly ask questions but yet I get no answers Regrets is spreading and destroying my body like cancer I dont feel right I dont like life All I do is write dark literature hoping that I recieve light ( positive comments).. Its plain to see that this world isnt meant for me Why am I here when I dont wanna be? What do these people see in life that I don't see? All of these attacks are killing me.. I just wanna recieve love from my sister and brother ( like friends etc.) They say you need to stop thinking like this, but it goes in one ear and out the other People tell me to hold on, but I can't wait.. I'm ready to re arrange my expiration date.. Title: This is not a poem. I am a prisoner of my own mind Happiness for me, is something that's hard to find.. I create illusions that have caused dellusions.. Happiness is so hard to find My mind is weak, for it can't stand its own ground Since I feel broken, I feel like there is no hope now This isn't some type of poem that I want to sell off the shelf this is more like a cry for help Why? Why can't I find happiness? Everyday, I let life pass me by... All I do is sit in the house, waiting to die Over the counter pills is what flows through my veins People's agreements with me is what kills my pain But for some reason, nothing is getting better This is not a poem, its more of a suicide letter.. No Title He just wanna stop the rain No one in the world understands his pain It seems as if the world is out to get him He's never the suspect. Hes always the victim He just wanna see happier days But luck never goes his way People constantly tell him that everythings gonna be okay But he still thinks about death everysingle day. He writes poems to calm his nerves Death is what he talks about with every single word.. He says he just wanna die In one of his poems he just asked, "Why?" His cyberspace friends comment him and say that hes gifted While his real friends tell him that he needs to write something uplifting Everynight is a fight as he puts the knife to his vein He wants to move it but hes scared to feel the pain He cries in his bed and say," I just wanna stop the rain." Because nobody in the world, understands his pain.. Title: If I were to die today If I were to die today, would you actually cry for me? Would you say, " I just lost my best friend today," ? Would you put my picture on your myspace page and write," I miss you so much," ? If were to die today, would you constantly brag about the good times that we had together? If I were to die today, would you post my pics on your myspace photo album? Would our mutual friends say," He was such a cool and funny guy. I miss him alot," ?? If I were to die today, would you all actually come to my wake or at least my funeral?? Would you keep me secure in your memories instead of having someone remind you of me?? Would you cry, smile, or laugh if people were to bring up my name? If I were to die today, would you even care? I'll be waiting for you at my funeral. Will you be there??

positive words that start with n? I am doing an acrostic poem for language arts. I have two n's in my name, and I can't think of any good n words? What are some DESCRIPTIVE words starting with n?

Do people respectively like art because they somtimes don't understand it? I showed a poem to a few friends and got a positive response. I know that the poem made no sense, in fact I had purposely written it in an abstract form that made it seem somewhat cryptic and fall under the guise of emotionally deep. I asked what they thought it was about and they couldn't quite say, I had to prompt them each time. Nevertheless everyone was impressed.

Can anyone think of a positive French verb that begins with a 't' or has a 't' somehwere in it. If so, please answer! It's for an acrostic French poem project, and I have no idea what to put! And make sure that it means something good. (We're supposed to be describing ourselves.) Thanks in advance! ugh! I am SO sorry everyone. I meant adjective! Ignore the question. I need ADJECTIVES to describe myself. And when I say positive, I mean in a good way. Like I don't want me(/)chant or anything. And again, sorry! But thanks to all who already answered! I'm sure I'll need verbs later.

what are some positive adjectives that describe a person, and start with the letters U & N.? i already have understanding for U, and nice for N. but that's all i can think of, and i need better one's that can be made into sentences for an acrostic poem. please help ! :)

I wrote a happy, summery poem. What do you think? Many of the poems I write are quite depressing and focus on sadness, so I thought I'd try writting a positive, happy, summery poem. What do you think? :D Sunrise: I look up to the clouds; So fluffy and white, I dance, I sing, I smile from within. The sun has risen, It graces the earth, The birds, The bees, And every new birth. My eyes awaken , My arms, they stretch , I curl my toes, and hope for the best. Like an eagle I glide; so effortlessly I go , Through the fields, Back and fro. The morning of my life; The day is new, Each second I smile; For I am with you

What is the title of this German Love Poem? My friend is trying to find a German love poem about unrequited love. She's not positive, but she thinks it's from a foreign Spanish film called the Dark Side of the Heart. In a certain scene of a movie (if it's from a movie) the man's poem goes along the lines of "not having you is worse than dying". Does anyone have any idea where this German love poem may be from? The poem was read in Spanish.

What do you think of my poems? a bit sad...but? Ok so, a few months back I wrote a couple poems, 4 of them. very short, but full of truth! I showed them to a friend (reluctantly) and she liked them! So I decided what the hell, I'll see what others thought of them! They are sad and a bit depressive, but tell me what you think! Negative comments are welcome as are positive ones (I just want true opinions) Number 1 was my favorite as well as my friend's. Please If you do like any of them, mention which was your favorite and why. Also, keep in mind, I've never written poems before, these are my first. 1. crying with no tears to show, dying inside burnt out the glow an ocean that has stopped to flow, a lifeless sea, a worthless boat she left for another to make her happy, now that lifeless sea is me now the tears they start to fall, love is a lie...afterall 2. before my dream was crushed, it felt like paradise wouldn't regret a thing, wouldn't have to think twice wishing it was real, because it felt so nice realizing the truth, my heart sunk and turned to ice 3. You wish you had, you wish you would, wish to be with her but never could, what would have been, something too good, to even believe, but still to dream i should 4. Life plays games, and never seems to lose you think you're going to win, end up looking like a fool don't know what to say, don't know what to do feeling cast into limbo, lost without a clue Thanks in advance for your opinions and comments :D Lovely! I'm not poetic at all, and the breakup was long ago, but memories sparked emotion, and emotion sparked the writing :D

What do you think of these two poems? To be happy, we must feel pain To be successful, we must fail To build up our lives, we must destroy them first To learn to laugh, we need to cry Experiencing the negative, discovers the positive. Rock bottom is where the greatest are born. ------------------------------------------------------------ And so I lay here Dead as can be Except for my thoughts, Which race recklessly My body so limp Not moving an inch Still here in mind I'm screaming inside It’s like a race Which thought first? But it doesn’t matter The winner isn’t rewarded Can’t keep myself balanced Tripping over every step Trying to pick myself up May as well lay down Ok so what are your opinions on both poems, they are only roughs so I'm open to change and suggestions, comments and ideas are always appreciated..And if you could throw in a title for each that would be wonderful :)

13 year old poems. opinions? These poems were written by my 13 year old cousin. I think she has talent. Would like to know your honest opinions on the following poems(they have no title) That cloud of sadness discourages my positive thoughts which give me hope. Lucky i am to see the horizon in one of the most significant and bizarre events which tear me apart. It's the end of the day now but my thoughts are there to be read. In the midst of that early morning i surrender my hopes of seeing you again. Untouchable and unexplored your body attached to my soul. I can feel the passion from your eyes claiming the right of seeing me once more. Lights will guide you home as a free bird in the sky.

How is my poem, any type of criticism (positive or negative appreciated.)? Green, black, pink, and blue, in the jungle of your shoe, keeping tight is what I do, In many a multi-coloured hue. I do a job but I don't care, I'm on top of something that you wear, Sometimes thick, or like hair, You always hate me when I tear. Snakes slithering slowly sly, Dirty dots on the dye, tight twists that you tie, lowly on linoleum I lie. Different styles, yours and mine All have an odd design I like thick you like fine Always shaped like a vine Green, black, pink, and blue, in the jungle of your shoe, and now it's time for my cue For I should say my last adieu. It's just something I just thought up about 10 minutes ago in about 5-10 minutes because I was bored. :p Haha, magical, I think I'll take that as a compliment. :p I love how a poem about shoe laces is emo though. ;) Sure thing messanger, shoe-pocs it is. :D

does this seem like a good poem about bullying and a positive solution? The Resolution To Evolution Pushed against a locker, Laughter surrounds him, Feelings of hurt and humiliation, And the bully only acted on a whim A new girl with no one to sit with, The popular table is laughing, Though at her she soon realizes Tears prick her eyes, as a girl at another table frowns The boy against the locker shrugs away, not letting the hurt truly inflict him For this bully is misunderstood, he thinks to himself So a simple why he asks as he walks away, Leaving a bully stunned and astray. Seeing remorse from no one at the table The girl turns to walk away, Prepared to eat lunch in a bathroom stall A hand on her arm makes her stop, Though this girl isn’t popular, She is a kind soul, The clique that rejected her frown, knowing their power is lost.

I need a cool female pen name to go with my personality? I write poems from the heart and soul. They are mostly about life and being real, but they also very Romantique. I'm in love with the 1960's, lotus flowers, and classical art, but obsessed with witchcraft and ancient Gaelic/ Celtic Myth. I want it to be kind of dark, but light at the same time. I was thinking Aileen Willow, but I'm not entirely positive. My real name is Anne. Any suggestions?

Is this a good start to a personal poem? They can be simple. They are made in a second or a lifetime. Positive or negative, they have an outcome. Over think decisions, Judge them very wise Too much information can change it Make you second guess, But be wise and stay with original thought. Decisions are big or small, don’t overlook a small or big decision ... Still thinking of the rest. Thanks guys.

Which short story idea is better? So I have a short Story assignment due soon, and I have these bunch of ideas but the problem is that they don't flow and go on for too long. And my teacher said our story should be 2-3 pages double-spaced, typed. So if you could give me a feedback on two of my ideas and tell me what I should change or add, i'd appreciate it. STORY #1 - about a 17-year-old high school senior; girl who just finds out that her family is going through a financial crisis. - Her father hid about this problem from her so it wouldn't distract her from school. - On her way to school in the morning she decides to go talk to guidance about this family problem and to see if some aid would be provided when she continues her post-secondary education. - NOTE: She is an honour student, so she'd probably get scholarships but she can't fully depend on it. - On her way to school she watches an ambulance rush by (SYMBOLIC) -When she goes to guidance at lunch and comes out of the office she sees the nurses office in front of guidance which reminds her of her volunteering shift at the hospital. - At the hospital the girl does CPR and saves an individual coincidentally a big business man's life. - He wants to make it up to her and thank her, so he decides to carry all her financial burdens. STORY #2 - a boy has big dreams about becoming a well-known poet someday. -He reads a poster of a poetry contest and decides to enter. -He then goes to the library and raeds poems and practices writing for what seems like days and hours. -He finally writes his poem what he callls his best piece yet. - He is positive that his poem will be one of the best if not the best. - Unfortunately he doesn 't win the contest. -he is dissappointed but he knows if he wants to succeed he must persevere. - The judge tels the winner to raed his poem out to the audience. - The boy discovers that the poem was indubitably good even better than his. - So the next day he goes to the library to read some poems to inspire him when he comes across a poem which seemed very familiar. - It was the same poem that the winner had read to the audience, and below it, the poet was someone else. - The boy quickly distinguished that the winner had plagerized. He felt upset but witty and a little happy. - He felt as i he should tell the judges about this but thought that he should keep to himself. -Although he'd be the second runner up and winner by default, it didnt feel like a victory. - It didn't need to to because he was victorious after all. --n so, please give me soem constructive criticism. Thank You :)

My mom has liver and bone cancer? She's doing pretty well as far as the chemo. She is going to her second round. She did an amazing progress her first treatment. I have made her a binder with healthy food recipes, cancer fighting foods, inspirational stories & poems, inspirational quotes, and positive thinking. I would like a beautiful quote that I can put as a cover what quote would you put?? Please help! =/

what do you think about this poem Negative and positive answers please? the leaves are falling all around it is dark at least that is what i've found the circle of life ending once again but is it the end? doesn't it just start again? as the leaves are crunched under your feet or by cars driving in the street they become less noticed They become unfocused spread through out the land it smells freshly grand then the snow begins the flutter as if a butterfly in the summer each tiny one with an individual shape all come down to make one big sheet to get pile into balls to entertain children no matter what flaws to get shoveled and scraped the ice is it's mate the snow melts away it creates a beautiful fresh day with green all around the sun seems to be found the rain is still here but it we hold dear as the flowers come out to bloom we sneeze in our room around us we look taking it with us in our journey books life has seemed to begin again even after it looks to end The sun is out for good we all play in our neighborhood appreciating the blue sky as we pass by we lay in the grass and look up at the stars we wonder how tiny and small we really are it gets to hot time to go inside taking freezing cold showers so we can sleep under the covers which eventually turn into sheets we have the A.C. running as we try to sleep the next day we jump in the pool just so that we stay cool the leaves fall again we greet them as an old friend we walk side by side the circle of life

Can someone please help me write a positive poem about Oprah? Can someone please help me write a positive poem about Oprah? I need to write a poem for school who I think the most beautiful person is...I picked Oprah. I was wondering if maybe someone can help me start off ... or maybe give me a line i could possibly use! Thanks so much...

Can you think of a positive acrostic poem for the name Constantino 4? i need it

Can you think of a positive acrostic poem for the name hazel? i need to make an acrostic poem for the hazel for homework, please help

how many poems do you have? what more meets the eye? do we live to express? My poetry style has changed and I now only write poetic expression through story like contexts. I have around 3000 poems, after being on here I just have to wonder how many other people have... My dreams build up a crystal clear image of the world we see only in nightmares, we are you and you are them, I am me and this is now. Money has no meaning, time is just era and it is here for recording the words that we pour into this mind bubbling cauldron, mixing and folding, writing more stories of our thoughts and our worries, negative and positive justly restoring the facts of the moment. The world we live in is already a cage so our thoughts have us running, we will never truly escape, I can understand that at times we forget, when I come on here I see that is not only me who's awake. To be who you are not you can’t change who you aren’t because you never was. It’s the time to be calm and just talk what we should, as time moves on we can think that you could, be who we are. I am amazed how each person looks at life, sometimes I take for it granted thinking it makes me feel good, I would hate to see anyone stranded and living life in the rough but maybe that’s what you need to see to make you believe what you think is merely a scheme of dreams, what is the life to lead? if it is not this someone explain what life is meant to be... 3rd paragrapgh *as time moves on we think that we could, be who we are.

WHAT ARE SOME POEMS YOU HAVE WRITTEN? hey i was just searching for some questions to answer when a question just pop ed into my brain im not a big writer but im starting to love it and my fave. thing to write is poetry so i just wanted to know if your a writer your self and what poems/short stories/etc. you've written please post them here i'd love to read them HERE are some of mine please feel free to give me feed back doesn't matter if its negative or positive feed back all feed back helps so i can improve my writing ^.^ I AM I am a pack: that wont carry your burden I am a river: that wont grant you passage I am a candle: that wont light your way I am a raft: that wont carry you to safety I am vengeance I am a tiger: that wants to be your friend I am lion: that wants to soothe your pain I am a snake: that wants to heal your wounds I am a scorpion: that wants to see your smile I am desire I am a cannon: that wont protect your home I am a spear: that wont come to your aid I am a sword: that wont fight for you I am a shield: that won’t defend I am betrayal Stealing beauty It was just sitting there It looked so lonely It was a beautiful sight to behold But it didn’t belong to me But he didn’t deserve to own it I did it should be me who wears that ring It was so beautiful a silver ring with a deep blue sapphire set in the middle It didn’t fit perfectly it was a little big But I needed it… I wanted it… So I took it I wonder if he’ll miss it Boredom I’m bored Me to I got this from my brother’s room Cool! Want ta try Sure Hold on let me get a light Hurry i'm so excited Here I feel weird Me to No seriously I know me to My chest hurts Yeah my heads dizzy I don’t feel good I do I cant breath Are you okay? Uhh HELP!! DROWNING The waves were a sight to behold. They were huge around 7 feet tall and they were beautiful a dark blue color. They almost looked like a liquefied sapphire. I dove into the freezing waters headfirst without thinking. Straight into a wave 8 feet tall it was like looking up at a mountain. The wave crashed into me and I was bombarded on all sides. I lost my breath tried to grasp the air there was nothing but water. Flailing recklessly I tried to get to shore but the ocean wouldn’t allow it. Just then I felt earth soft sand and air…. I could breath again. By, Dominic E, Di Silva oh and thanks to JC for helping me think of this question! ^.^ dear =] omg i love your poem that has to be one of the best poems i have ever read in my life! and please do email me that poem id love to read it my email is disilvadominic@yahoo.com dear Snickers Bar, i love your poetry their kind of sad but i still love them io think i like #2 the best though keep up the great work and maybe try to write something happier ^.^ Dear modest the prince, thoiughs all souind like great poems why dont you post some of them here so i can read them ^.^ ear monopoly , omg those poems were great i loved the last one it was awsome

i have a question for those who rate/critique poems on here? Does age change your opinion? *sorry if this sounds rant-ish, I’m not trying to come off annoying. I’m trying to say what my mind’s thinking and it can sound like it has a really bad attitude. I ensure you my mind does not have an attitude.* My writing style has changed, but not drastically. I find sometimes I’ll submit a poem and say my age, 15. I feel like then I get a lot more 'ooohs' and 'awes' and more positive reviews. Yet, other times, I don't and (no offense to anybody and it hasn't happened recently) I get really b-itchy answers. I can take a critique well, but I get annoyed when people are like "I hated it, do you even like know like what like poetry is?" Sometimes I get the feeling that just because it's a common user/ Top Contributer that people seem to applaud their poems more. Their poems don't even make sense sometimes- like they could write blue 20 times and get a great review. So does age influence you? Does the user change your opinion? PS how do you like this poem? Blue Blue Blue Blue Blue Blue Blue Blue Blue Blue Blue Blue Blue Blue Blue Blue Blue Blue Blue Blue! EXACTLY!!___

Trying to find a poem on a bully enjoying bullying others, please help? iv asked this question before but i think its been miss understood. for english i need to analyse 3 pieces of work showing how the authors have constructed bullies to look positive and negative.. i have already chosen 2 pieces (one book and one advertisment) showing bullies as negatively constructed by their authors.. portraying them as bad... the the third needs to be a poem showing them positively... so i need a poem, perhaps by someone who was a bully at school saying how good it was, saying how he wasnt the bad guy but that it was the others or something like that. so that way the author constructs them to look good/positive. the analysis part of this bully poem is to say that he/she constructed it positively through metaphores etc.... i also need to be able to reference the poem... so an author and a webpage link or somthing like that would be great.... iv been searching for such a poem for hours with no luck.. id be greatfull for any help thankyou

What do you think of my poem? So I don't write poems that much, but I'm writing one right now and as a beginner, I was wondering what you think of my poem? Positive feedback and constructive criticism are appreciated :) Thanks! I gaze from my window into the night First it is nothing, but eventually I see Is it the stars in the sky that draw me in? Or the darkness that presses down on me The quiet street rests while strangers sleep, They have their own place of security Is it the warmth of the night that draws me in? Or the darkness that presses down on me A soft breeze whirls through the open window, And cools me down on the hot summer night Is it the fresh feeling that draws me in? Or the darkness that presses down on me I reflect on moments of the nights’ past, They are little moments of grief and glee Is it the joyful moments that draw me in? Or the darkness that presses down on me There is not a sound in the world outside The silent night dwellers do not worry Is it the sound of nothing that draws me in? Or the darkness that presses down on me Some may say it is the witching hour, They don’t know of its lonely mystery Is it the peaceful isolation that draws me in? Or the darkness that presses down on me

I love poetry. Is this a good love poem? I am 17 years old. I am not that good at poetry but I am learning how to write better. Im giving it to my crush who I have liked for 6 years. Do you think he will like this poem? Positive answers please (: -You- Becoming lost in the beautiful sky always makes me think of your dark brown eyes. Your sweet, cute always nice to me I want you forever but Im not sure that will be. You make me smile in everything you do I cant imagine a day me going on without you. You treat me with respect which most guys don't Im never going to give up on you I cant. I wont! I want to tell you how I really feel but your honest reply might make me close the seal. The clock is ticking as time runs out I have until summer and then I will be without. The day will come soon I have a no choice to back down and forget or somewhere inside me; find my voice. Love is a gift something I want to share with a guy I really like, a guy who really cares. So what Im saying is I really like you I want to be your forever your life, wish, dream come true. By, Jasmine Nash<3